Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.
DOL 1: NA
DOL 2: NA
DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
- Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe they should not have any practice. Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
- To ensure success, the management should require those - the ones doing the project - to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
- Darnel doesn't have any reason to question those instructions but he wants a explanation of that exam. Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
- Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long-term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
- Yes, Terri won the game; but at that time, we didn't know what she had won. Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
- The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered us the most, ended the project before we could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
- You should have heard their voice because I told them how their vacation time would be affected. Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
- Regardless of what grandpa had said, it'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
- Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside our neighborhood. Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
- Because neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we did not know the definition of the word 'chide.'
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
- Macus, a serious a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game. Sentence 2: the race between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
- The race among the three relay teams is close; none of the three teams is giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
- Ms. Perez, the science teacher stated, "Within a short time free-election lasers will change the world as the inventions of electricity did." Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
- Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
- Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South with an emphasis on African Americans. Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
- Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
- My older sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight. Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
- At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
- Having read the novel The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution. Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
- Because there were so many things to do I couldn't finish my homework, practicing my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
- Mr. Guarino told us that Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, maintained peace in that country. Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
- Having finished her foreign exchange trip, a plane ticket was requested to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
- "I reviewed the book really well; I received a good grade on the report, said Sonia. Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
- "Although we have twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appeared to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
- He was unable to attend our fiftteenth high school reunion because he lives too far away. Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
- Regardless of the poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
- You should have followed three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil.
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
- Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
- Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he out of student government?
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
- There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league; a terrific goalie, a great offense and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
- Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car. Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
- After the race began, Delia took these medals to the track club located at east of the school.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
- "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments." Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
- She was quite young--no more than twenty-six--when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
- Yes, they are going to welcome whoever want to come to the rally whether Democrat or Republican. Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
- This car, 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable regardless of what TV show, Classic Cars reports.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
- Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one come to basketball practice. Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
- They mentioned that on January 2nd, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.
DOL 1: NA
DOL 2: NA
DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
- Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe they should not have any practice.
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
- To ensure success, the management should require those - the ones doing the project - to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
- Darnel doesn't have any reason to question those instructions but he wants a explanation of that exam.
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
- Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long-term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
- Yes, Terri won the game; but at that time, we didn't know what she had won.
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
- The effect of the program cancellation, which bothered us the most, ended the project before we could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
- You should have heard their voice because I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
- Regardless of what grandpa had said, it'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
- Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside our neighborhood.
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
- Because neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we did not know the definition of the word 'chide.'
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
- Macus, a serious a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
Sentence 2: the race between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
- The race among the three relay teams is close; none of the three teams is giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
- Ms. Perez, the science teacher stated, "Within a short time free-election lasers will change the world as the inventions of electricity did."
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
- Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
- Our social studies teacher asked us to write reports on the South with an emphasis on African Americans.
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
- Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
- My older sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
- At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
- Having read the novel The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
- Because there were so many things to do I couldn't finish my homework, practicing my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
- Mr. Guarino told us that Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II, maintained peace in that country.
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
- Having finished her foreign exchange trip, a plane ticket was requested to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
- "I reviewed the book really well; I received a good grade on the report, said Sonia.
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
- "Although we have twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appeared to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
- He was unable to attend our fiftteenth high school reunion because he lives too far away.
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
- Regardless of the poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
- You should have followed three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil.
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
- Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
- Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he out of student government?
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
- There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league; a terrific goalie, a great offense and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
- Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car.
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
- After the race began, Delia took these medals to the track club located at east of the school.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
- "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments."
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
- She was quite young--no more than twenty-six--when she earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
- Yes, they are going to welcome whoever want to come to the rally whether Democrat or Republican.
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
- This car, 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable regardless of what TV show, Classic Cars reports.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
- Because it snowed heavily last night, it's all right if no one come to basketball practice.
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
- They mentioned that on January 2nd, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated